Revision Example: The Devil in Nita Dodd Part Two

NOTE: I should mention that I’m running spell checks all the way through the revisions and at least one grammar check, although that’s a pain since a lot of the dialogue is at least semi-ungrammatical (YES I KNOW THAT’S A FRAGMENT).  The essays here are about content, not spelling, grammar, or syntax, but you do have to check for those, too.

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