Time

JENNY: Welcome to the time fight, HWSW readers. Bob and I are miles apart on this one, so for once we won’t be saying, “You know, I agree with that.”

Here’s the thing about time in fiction: You want it to be as clear as possible, structured to inform the meaning of the story.

Scenes, Sex and Violence and Snark

NOTE: We both had rough weeks so we were even more disorganized than usual on this one.  I thought Sex and Violence was next week, Bob had it scheduled for this week, and we were both so zotted that it took us awhile to figure out we were going in different directions.  You must all be so impressed.  Next week we’ll be fighting about Time, so we should be more focused then.

Jenny: A scene is a unit of conflict.